Im corned beef..can anyone give this the once over?

[itsnotkcearl]

Im slowly going deaf, one ear at a time...even stuff center panned sounds about 2 o clock


the vocoder needs rerecorded, and the pianos a bit loose but are the levels OK on this? thanks anyone that has a few mins

[Greg_L]

I like the looser pianos. It helps make it not sound so robotic. But it all seems fine to me. As someone that doesn't know the finer details of this kind of stuff, I could just sit back and listen and nothing sounded bad at all to me.

[itsnotkcearl]

Brilliant Greg...Im serious about my hearing...I think its the frequency of my childrens whining that ruining my hearing...that and ramming cotton buds in

[Bubba]

Sounds really good to me. Nice electronic kick, ambient synths work well. There's a bit of hiss and I was hoping for a chord change in the first third of the song, but otherwise great.

[itsnotkcearl]

Thx for listening bubba...yeah theres hiss in all my stuff now. I use tape and Im a lazy bastard

[Greg_L]

Brilliant Greg...Im serious about my hearing...I think its the frequency of my childrens whining that ruining my hearing...that and ramming cotton buds in

Kids do whine in that shrill frequency range that is damaging to the ears. Benadryl and cough syrup usually takes care of it. For them. And you.

[itsnotkcearl]

imperial IPAs working for the time being, not on them but
I dont give a shit after I drink it

[vomitHatSteve]

Seems generally pretty cohesive to me.

I might take those hats down a touch. They're pretty up-close and slightly harsh.

[itsnotkcearl]

Thanks Steve...They were even louder on the mix previous to this, nearly shook my filling outs

[vomitHatSteve]

So that means you can calculate the resonant frequency of your head, right? That could be useful to know!

[itsnotkcearl]

Would be disasterous if my enemies were to find out!

[rayc]

I have some hearing loss - freqs that match my tinnitus mainly. I think it sounds really good.

[itsnotkcearl]

Age sucks Ray...its been downhill since I was thirty!

[miroslav]

...even stuff center panned sounds about 2 o clock

Last year I had some kind of sinus thing, and it clogged my left ear, not where it was real noticeable, but when I was in the studio, I realized that everything was off center to the right, and I had to compensate with about 4dB more level on the left to get it centered.
That shit lasted for about a month...but I went and got some of the original Sudafed...the stuff you now need to see the pharmacists for...and I took those decongestants for a couple of weeks, and it opened up the inner ear canal and my hearing came back, and the mix balance came back.

Anyway...I can listen to electronic, synth, trance stuff a lot, as long as there's interesting lines and instruments/sounds coming and going.
It's great if you just want a background mood without listening to "songs" and hearing vocals.
It sounds good as is...some nice transitions.

[itsnotkcearl]

Thx...Im def more deaf in one ear...have been for years, but I think I need my ear syringed! So I can make some money in the wax candle market

[rayc]

Nice bit or rhyming slang by the way.
Listened again - if you're an unhappy chappy you're just in perm 2nd guess mode.

[itsnotkcearl]

I finish so few tracks nowadays Ive not got a clue how to mix anymore...anyway theyre both getting sent to preschool next month, maybe Ill get more done...fuck knows

[ido1957]

The first part was repetitive, remember I have ADHD
But after the first minute it started getting interesting and I relaxed and just enjoyed the music.
Recording sounds good all in all so not issues for me in that department.
You do have some NICE sounding synths man.....

[itsnotkcearl]

Thx Ido...need to be more active in here forgot this was up and I need to listen to other tunes in here too

Yeah the intro...trying to not make every tune have the intro of a 10 minute dance tracks hard for me. Coming up with more original approaches to bringing a tune in escapes me as well. Glad you like the synths...Im building up a nice collection, mixture of vintage and modern

[TripleM]

It all sounded very good to me.

Someone commented about the hats. I agree they're either a little loud or have too much midrange dialed in. Like in the mid-2kHz area.

Other than that, I thought it was real good.